Here are two documents recently located at NA, Kew. Both are Crown Copyright. The documents are made available under the Open Government licence. These images were not made by the NA and are not subject to their image reproduction policy.
In the first Dudley Pound dated 17th Nov 1941 writes in his signature green ink:
In the second, Oliver Bevir Director of Naval Ordnance responded, clearly confirming "the short time she had been in commission" as the predominant factor in Pow's case. It will be unnecessary to remind me PoW had "commissioned" in January since what Bevir was referring to was the 14" quad turret armament which was only handed over to the RN in late April. His optimistic tone IMHO disguised the inherent difficulties which remained.Have you read the account of Bismarck action? I understand the KGVs gave a lot of trouble. What has been done about this please. Are they likely to have further trouble in a prolonged action.
It seems unlikely to me The First Sea Lord was still "pretending" PoW had suffered from serious gun reliability problems in November 1941 as part of an imaginary conspiracy. His enquiry is clear and the response from the Director of Naval Ordnance is equally clear, PoW had problems in only 18 salvoes compared with the longer time it took KGV to develop major problems, because of "the short time she had been in commission".
This independently confirms the similar observation made in the document I supplied, signed by Gerald Langley.
Provided this discussion remains active we will move on to the specific detail of A V Godding's description of the failure in Y turret's ammunition supply system.
[Commentary redacted WJJ]
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